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Tuesday, July 31, 2018

The Meerkats

 This week we have been learning about speech marks and apostrophes.

 The Meerkats where eating dragon fruit "Yuck" said the smallest meerkat. The biggest meerkat said "Yum".
The wisest and oldest meerkat said "This fruit has been around for years it's about to stop growing".
The queen of meerkats said "Make sure all the dragon  fruit trees are coped down at once".
The the fattest meerkat said "Your queen  why do we have to cut down all the dragon fruit trees".
The queen got really rage and screamed and screamed " have you not been listing!!!!! The dragon fruit trees have become possinus Does that answer your question" The fattest one said " Yes" 

  The middle meerkat said "What are you talking about it's so sweet it will rot your teeth".

 What other  punctuation could I put in my story? 

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2 comments:

  1. AnonymousSeptember 26, 2018 at 11:43 AM

    Hi Sienna. My name is Olive and I go to Rawhiti School. I love this because you were really descriptive.
    Did you know that I LOVE Meerkats?
    Next time you could try and add more of a variety of words.
    Why did you choose to Meerkats?

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  2. AnonymousSeptember 26, 2018 at 11:44 AM

    Hi sienna.I’m Sophie A from Rawhiti school. I love this because you made it really funny.
    Did you know that I LOVE meerkats?
    Next time you could add more descriptive things.
    Why did you do it about meerkats?

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